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July 31, 2011
"Horrifying!"

He typed the word, then considered. That wasn't a very evocative beginning. He backed the cursor over it.

"Yolanda wished the day could begin again."

He cursed. His writing teacher told them to come up with a "hook", to grab people's attention. He thought of novels he'd read that drew him, futilely. Mind was a blank.

He erased the sentence and stared at the display. He closed his eyes. He drew a breath and placed his fingers on the keyboard.

"It wasn't the blood so much as the fact that the body was completely enshrouded in its own intestines."